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Guided Writing

Directions:

Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese

假设你是张华，在市区读初中的表弟李峰下周末计划到松江游玩。他在松江博物馆（Songjiang Museum）辰山植物园（Chenshan Botanical Garden）两个景点间犹豫不决，想听听你的意见。请你写一份邮件给他，推荐其中一个景点并说明理由。

写作思路

Model Writing

Dear Li Feng，

    The Spring is in the air and word came that you are planning your trip to Song Jiang district. Despite the appealing historical knowledge and exhibits in the Songjiang Museum, Chenshan Botanical Garden, in my humble opinion, is a no better choice.

    When it comes to why the Botanical Garden is given the first priority, reasons abound. Initially, spring is the best time for you, a child living in downtown, to appreciate nature. Trees shadows the road, and flowers explodes like a fire, and so impressive is the scene that you can even have a taste of spring in the air. Only by wandering between trees and flowers can you have a closer contact to mother nature and breathe the fresh air which is precious in big cities.

    What’s more, having a tour to the Botanical garden can furnish you with the passion for protecting the environment. Mansions and skyscrapers consist of our living backgrounds and weaken our awareness of protecting the environment. A visit to botanical garden can arouse us of our love for nature and make us come to realize our damage to the land that gave birth to us.

  To conclude, since the spring is still waiting for you with flowers on her head, why not have a date with the beautiful spring?

                                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours,

                                                                                                                                                                                                 Li Ming

写作步骤三字经

Step I:   审：审体裁；审时态；审人称

Step II：列：列提纲；列观点；列句式

Step III: 连：加连词；连逻辑；连情感